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Hi Sophie here i just wanted to say that your writing is really good. but there are somethings you could work on for next time. like make shore evrithing makes sence but evrything elce is great.
thank you sophie but i think you mean like everything thats all but bai bestie
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Hi Sophie here i just wanted to say that your writing is really good. but
ReplyDeletethere are somethings you could work on for next time. like make shore evrithing makes sence but evrything elce is great.
thank you sophie but i think you mean like everything thats all but bai bestie
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